The render is great and so is the brushing around it. Maybe loose the scanlines and grunge up the bg a little bit to fit in with that because it looks cool. The bg itself looks great but it doesn't fit in with the render and vice versa. Same with the text, it's ok but move it towards the render, make it feel part of it more. If you take everything as an individual part it's great, they need to blend it together as a whole piece though. Just my thoughts, it's amazing the progress you're making as an artist, keep it going.
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