only because your new will i do this for you
font: well its not terrible but lets say its not good either, hard to read and the shadow i think ruins the other render 4/10
bg: it's kind of plain but still looks good, simple sometimes is a good thing and i like the blurred render its blends well 8/10
render: render on the left is cut very well and the render itself is pretty good effects aren't great though, render on the right is too blurry 6.5/10
logo: blurry but it looks nice still positioning is good i just don't like how its rotated 7/10
border: its good but it would look better with 1 px black i think 8/10
overall for one of your first its pretty good and the only thing you need to change too much is the font