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My first wall so go easy

laytownking

The render brushing should be a bit more random, actually a lot more random. It looks tooo symmetrical about the render pic. Try and use the brushing to blend the render in more. Reduce the opacity of the pattern too, i think it will look better.

But if its your first wall, its an extremely good attempt. Keep it up!

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Yea, i thought i did have the opacity low on the pattern. But i was zoomed out when i made the wall so i didnt realize. Cant really be arsed to fix it up lol. But yea its my first wall.

Darren

yea i agree with ritwikr. the bg and text is very nice though