laytownking

Trying out a new style. Still have to develop it a lot actually, so any feedback is useful.



V2 - MUCH better -


Thanks.

laytownking

Added a v2 - MUCH better.

marydj7

yep...i like this
its little details like his arm going over the text from the right render that work on this
good colours, text...can't fault it tbh
maybe you could create a touch more room for the main render...and add a light frame around it?

Niran

Love the text work, especially the top bit. Not a fan of the 'HENRY' text tho, the colours weird. I think the pictures have to be a bit more clear and sharper. The one on the right is far too blurry.

Good work tho, keep it up!

madhandles

The typography is well executed and the space well used, and overall it looks great. One fault I spotted though was that there were faint lines going over the right hand of the leftmost render of Henry, but other than that it's all well done, good job.

laytownking

Niran, the henry's looking weird because i've actually use the text as a mask for a picture below it - thats why its looking darker, and yeaha the pics are too blurred. I'm working on a Gerrard one - keeping the pictures as close to the original as possible.

Thanks Marc, didn't notice that. Its actually the adidas stripes from Henry's shoulder. I'll mask that.

Thanks for the feedback, it really helped. I hope the Gerrard one comes out better.