dhopper

well its my 3rd one + the feedback was more brushing + better BG.



i think its abit patchy in parts. but comments will be appreciated

retired_hollie

Okay, so... smudging can't make nearly all BG
i don't like brushes you've used, maybe try lightning brush set pack 3? use it with white and set on overlay
font is terrible - change it on Century Gothic
render isn't cutted nice, but it needs practice, so in nearly future you'll cut better
there's also no effects - copy layer with render three times to have four layers with render
on first make gaussian blur 4.0
second and third set on soft light
and on last, fourth, click ctrl+shift+u to delete colours and set the layer to overlay

keep practicing

R10+

Wat's happening to Henry??!!

anfieldgirl

The text can improve, and the background lacks some spark. You should also add render effects to the render. Keep practicing.