this isnt great at all, but im assuming your a beginner so ill go easy.. i would steer clear of beveled text, and stick to using decent fonts and using drop shadows and strokes and gradient overlays. the render isnt the best either, its very sharp and doesnt look great, but dont worry cos ull find easier ways of developing and cutting renders, and lastly the background could have more going on with it. grey isnt much of an eyecatching colour and the background its self could use more work with brushes and textures. nice start though and keep trying mate
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