Yoinky

Don't really like it. A bit empty on left side, went for something simple (BG) and complex as same time (render) but I just don't feel it. Comments please.

marydj7

yeah, maybe some kind of faded badge on the left.

also change the "on" to "in" in the text

nice work, keep it up.

chica1985

i quite like this, render effects are great
the left bottom corner is a bit plain though, maybe add a rooney pic in the background or the england badge?

ready on time and ready in time mean the same thing. . . just add a question mark at the end

keep it up

marydj7

so it does...I am obsessed with grammer at the mo..its obviously taking its toll, I'm getting muddled.

retired_Dash

Perhaps if you're to add a picture to the background drop the text down so that it's lower on the image?

Yoinky

I'll try add another Rooney pic later, but first wanted to improve the whole thing, in particular colours.

Unknown

New version is great, the first newer version is better. Colours are great, render effects awsome, text is pretty nice and background is good also. Great work again

Nickell

will he be read on time? dont u mean Ready lol, other than that little text mistake on the 2nd 1 i love the effects on the render 2nd 1 is better than the first one becasue u have used more colour in it but keep it up hope to see more decent things from you