hunter1801

http://www.img-upload.com/uploads/untitled-342.jpg
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laytownking

Firstly, the text - when you read it, it doesn't flow. Try 'Roy Keane - True Man United Legend' instead of true legend of manchester united. The white is tooo bright and glowy in the text.

The render - you've gone for Niran's famous 'disintegration'-styled render (i think) but its just not working here. There are tooo many Keanes behind the render, maybe try reducing the opacity of those layers. But mainly, the brushing on the bottom right just doesn't work. The brushing/effect on his left shoulder is nice though.

Hope this helps. Its a very nice try, and wiht some minor improvements to text and render it can be really good.

flee

Looks reallly nice, just remove some of the grey renders behind the main render. Shapen it a nd fix the text as ritwikr said.

hunter1801

v2
http://www.img-upload.com/uploads/untitled-344.jpg

laytownking

Much better i think! But continue the smudging sort of effect on his legs also (like on his shoulders). The heavy brushing on his legs isn't blending in. Also, go to dafont.com and check out some fonts. Try using Century Gothic.

retired_Kristine89

good wall man.. and a great one for the legend that is Roy Keane..
i like waht u did with the main render but i think its a bit plain..
but good one

funksonic7

I like that one!