DebDeb

I posted it before, but hell, im gunna post it again.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/32005594/

Critique pls.

verbaT

It's very nice, text is good and render is also very nice.

Very good try t3tz =]

retired_Maqbool

Great work there .
Background ,text and render looks really nice .

Cindarella

It's not good, at all in my opinion, sorry.

The BG colour makes me wanna' puke and doesn't blen or suit the render in any way.
Render is, erm.. Weird.
The only good thing is the text IMO.

Sorry.

retired_chiquita

Its nice work Tetly, Love the text and the idea

bill164

The general effects are nice, like Niran's Bergie wall. The bottom of the wall is a tad too dark and the render, I'm not sure on for some reason. The text is what is really great for me, as a whole piece it's pretty good too. Keep it up.

retired_aver

Zlatan looks like he has a tutu. It's fitting really. But I love the wall, maybe if only the face you made it without the ripple or dissolved effect. The background looks fantastic though and it all puts emphasis on the render. Work on the left more, position and the actual font.

DebDeb

Thanks everyone, i appreciate all the comments.

Anyone fancy having a shot at modifying ? PM me.

adobe

really nice job tetly,although i don't really like the player and on the pic he looks like a crow :confused: the wall is pretty nice though,effects around the render are well executed,text is great too,i like the smudge(i don't know how to call it) effect on the text as if u've drunk or have something in your eye :eek: kewl job,teeny weeny