retired_WiccanWade

hi,
here is my new printing company logo, the name is "long fatt offset printing co."
i want LF shortform to present my logo.
see below
pls comment!!!!!!!
thank you

nitrobutler

As far as I'm concerned, you could've stopped with (A)!
It's a clean design, the lettering aught to be legitable at any size, I'd go with that one.
good luck with your new venture

Silky

Oh, yeah....definately A. I'm with nitro on this one. [righton]

retired_WiccanWade

2nd version

nitrobutler

Any of these will do fine! My personel fav is (F)

jaclyn

The second set makes me think that bathroom rolls are the product, and the first set yells "E" at me, which is not the intended message. I'd hike back to the drawing board. ... and please take this the rfight way!

retired_WiccanWade

3rd version

Doodad

Like the others, I liked A in the first batch, and F in the second.

I don't think that you should be too concerned with getting it to be instantly recognizable as an L & F - otherwise you could just type it out plainly. The point is to have something striking, and something people can associate with you and what you do.

The problem with the third batch is that it's not as stylish as your first two - the horizontal and vertical spacings in A of the third batch differ, which irritates the eye.

You can also try a mirror image of the F - you do not need to have it the right way around - dyslexics need to print too after all. Refer to the examples below - one shows the flipped F - giving you a nice interlinking with the L. The other is just with even spacing.

retired_WiccanWade

4nd version
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/3596/lflogo21dd.jpg

Doodad

C is good in batch number 4. The white block makes one think of a sheet of paper - so that brings with it the connection there. What's more it's striking yet practical (not too many colours, easy to scale). You should vectorize it - then you'll be able to scale it with impunity.