Dreamcatcher (update)

Raven · 03-02-2005, 09:36 AM

Some fun with 3D/Poser/PS....
---Maya

jaclyn · 03-02-2005, 02:22 PM

Really like it Maya, beautiful composition. My only criticism is the bird doesn't seem to be in motion because of the 90? angle of the dreamcatcher to the ground.

Welles · 03-02-2005, 02:55 PM

That's a great use of Poser, Maya. Your composition is extremely intriguing and implies a complete story, not quite told, but left for the viewer to fill in the details. The only thing I'd like to see might be a few more highlights on the raven (?) to give it a bit more definition.

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Raven · 03-02-2005, 06:29 PM

Thanks SCync -- that's a good suggestion and in the next render I'll shift the angle of the dreamcatcher a bit to imply a bit of swing from the raven's flight with it.

Thanks also Welles -- adjusted a small version just for posting here.

---Maya

Silky · 05-28-2005, 06:12 PM

Thats great raven, except it looks like the lady is looking above the raven. Seems like she should be looking at the dreamcatcher. And maybe a slight motion blur on the raven so it looks like it's in motion.

Raven · 05-28-2005, 08:09 PM

Thanks Patrick! I did in fact do an updated version of this a few months ago and posted it over on TG, but I guess I forgot to post the updated one here also -- it might have been when there was a forum problem here and during those days when there was no way to post anything. Anyway, here's the updated version I had done.

(P.S. I had thought about twisting the feathers in the air but decided in the end they looked better like this for the time being. Maybe if I go back to this one at another time I'll see about a few more things.

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