retired_milla0225

good work this, united_forever. Glad to see you're still here. Keep it up.

retired_edmari1

Thanks chesterfan2

I will be back soon with the next update and more after that.

retired_edmari1

hey guys

unfortunately my file became corrupted for some reason and i now cannot open it therefore not allowing me to continue with this story.

I may in the near future begin another campaign with my all time favourites Manchester United, but until then may i say thank you to all who helped me along the way in getting me officially on my feet in this forum. Thankyou and i hope you enjoy my stories to come in the near future.

Thank you

United forever

retired_alex_tan

That idiom doesn't make any sense mr critical. I suggest you look at your own writing techniques before posting...

retired_aurie

That idiom doesn't make any sense mr critical. I suggest you look at your own writing techniques before posting... </BLOCKQUOTE>
I can see that you missed out on my following posts, or maybe you skipped them completely to serve your own purposes. I don't really know, nor care.
But since you're bringing up my stories, why don't you point out the obvious problems with them in the relevant places?

I'm like everyone else in here, I want some constructive criticism so I can improve on my storytelling. If you don't have anything to add, then smeg off.

retired_bbcarr

Sorry to see this end prematurely, united_forever


Haze17, I suggest you read the entire thread and axeman's subsequent posts before wading in with your comments.

As the story won't continue any further, I'll close this before it become purely an argument thread.