retired_pahuja_satish

This is the ****ing worst story I've ever read on this board.

bruno

Then don't read it...

retired_cowboy69

No way Ok it's not exactly realistic but its brilliant!

retired_bbcarr

<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by SoS:
This is the ****ing worst story I've ever read on this board. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

i really hope you're not serious with that post and that i'm completely missing something. there is no point to that post. if you don't like the story, be constructive and tell the writer what it is you don't like about it and suggest ways to make it better. this kind of attitude is hardly going to entice new writers when they see it and it's hardly befitting of someone recently voted into a privileged position within the community on the SOTW panel. just insulting someone's story is ridiculous.

retired_embartl

Honestly Terk, you edited your own post and still messed up SOTW


Added support for Bruno here btw.

retired_pahuja_satish

I didn't post that!

retired_pahuja_satish

And I honestly mean that as well. I have just changed my password, I fear I may have been hacked. If you look at all of my other posts, you will see that it is not consistent with anything else I have posted, and if there is a way to track the IP of the person posting, I suggest you compare that post's IP to mine.

Sorry for any offence caused Bruno

retired_bbcarr

the fact that ive just looked back through this story and seen that in the early pages you voice your support for the story would seem to back up your claim that is wasn't you who posted that.

bruno

It's ok SoS. Since you say that you didn't post that message I trust you.

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After the match I phoned Eddie.

EG Eddie Gray.

PC Hello Eddie...

EG Oh no, not you. What do you want now?

PC That's no way to greet your employer, is it now?

EG That's my way. Take it or leave it.

PC Cocky as always, I hear. You'd better change that attitude before you upset the wrong people.

EG So, what do you want Campbell? I'm a busy man.

PC Aren't we all, Eddie? Aren't we all?

EG Perhaps… Enough with the chitchat now.

PC Ok, if that's what you want.

EG It is.

PC Fine by me… How would you, and Rachel of course, like to come over to me on Saturday for a dinner party?

EG He, he...

PC What are you laughing for? You think I'm joking? Well, can't blame you really. We haven't got the best of relationships, have we?

EG You really serious about this? A dinner party at your place?

PC Yes.

EG And you want me to come?

PC And Rachel, yes.

EG Why are you suddenly polite to me?

PC Don't you like it? Ok, I promise I won’t make a habit of it. But let's just say I want to sort out our problems. Don't you?

EG Mhmm… And the secret agenda is?

PC Secret agenda?

EG Yeah, you heard me.

PC I don’t have any.

EG I’m sure you don’t, Campbell. You always have a hidden agenda.

PC Just like you, right?

EG Well, at least I'm not hypocritical about mine. Not like you anyway... So who’s going to be there?

PC Just about everyone from the board. And also a few of my friends… It’ll be a great opportunity to show the board that we two don’t have any issues with each other, don’t you think?

EG Perhaps…

PC Come on, you know you want to…

EG I sure as hell don’t want to… But I’ll be there.

PC Great. See you on Sunday then.

EG Yeah, yeah…

retired_mully

<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Peacemaker7:
It give the impression that its more popular than it is, and attracts readers is one thing. There are far better stories than this, by far better writers that dont get that ratio, because when a story is popular, it tends to get replies, so someone is taking the pish somewhere.

I'll be keeping my eye on this you can be sure of that. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

I have a few comments on this story it's alright but a bit predictable and when anyone views the story the rating goes up he won't be doing it himself he'd get a bit bored wouldn't he ???