chillman

Hi everyone. Chuck here. I have been looky louing long enough. A friend of mine wanted me to work on a cd cover for her. We did a collage in black and white and I have some reservations about it. Let me know what what you think. Be gentle. It's my first time. This is actually the inside of the booklet.

nitrobutler

Chillman: Art is in the eye of the beholder, that said let me make some observations
1/lovely model
2/image at lower right has different contrast compared to the others.
3/ image at lower left has too much space over her head (grassy area).
4/ I agree with you about using B/W (which is great to use to show moods etc.) But seeing she has a great smile in all the shots why not let that smile shine in color?
5/ Great start!

Lee

I think you did a great job, Chuck. Kudos, bro. [righton]

John1

It's actually quite good, but the variations in the photographs could have been better; they all look a bit the same, same expressions, environment, clothes, lighting, etc.
But like I said, the actual work inside Photoshop is well done [righton]
One tip; try to make the image less "symmetric", the result will be more dynamic

chillman

Thank you very much for the tips. I'll work on it some more and post the new one up. Thanks!