retired_txar215

Here's the wall:



http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7640/adudi2.jpg

Donna

I don't reaylly like this style, too clearly. Smudge is awesome. BG is too simple and i odon't like the typo.

retired_MiniBoy

Well i really like it, but i agree with Pierrot on the BG. The rest is awesome. Good job!

CravingBound

I love the clean look in the BG. This looks great, I like it all.

Unknown

I'm not feeling this one i'm afraid. I think the different styles of the render effects and the simple clean background clash too much and don't really work well together. If the effects on the render were more simple then it would be a much better wall imo.

adobe

Yeah,i am afraid too that it's not the best you can do.Teh smudge is not really fitting to the clean style,the second Adu is too dark and i think you haven't faded the flag/clouds texture too well on the left.You could make a solid text,not overlayed or with lowered opacity.It's a good wall,but nothing spectacular. :/

CnixZ06

I like what we did, i didn't know if the smudge stuff was good or not so i left it in and was gonna let wojtala decide.

Anywho I think the wall looks good and would look nice on a desktop.

I can see where you guys are commin from though.

retired_Berendey

Maybe if he was brought out a lil more it would like better
but i like it anyways
nice job.

legomyeggroll

Yeah i think a more grungey bg would go with the render effects. The render effects are very nice tho guys. Also i think more could have been done with the text. Dont get me wrong tho its a nice wall just you too can do better imo

laytownking

Nice, but i think it would look much better without the grunge effects, it almost looks like it was done for the sake of doing it - very random and out of place.

Nice BG and text could be a bit better. But overall nice wall.