adobe

So,i got inspired to do this total design,because it will be my diploma work next year,and will be actually my final exam.I've made all for may be 3-4 hours,could make more shit,but i don't think A4 papers with the logo would be interesting.I tried to be as creative as possible,and to make it as simple and classy as possible.
The idea for "The Legacy - SportsEquipment" ran around my head for a couple of days,so i decided to make something with it.I've used pictures from http://sixsixone.com for the helmets and body armour and http://mtb-bg.com for the background pictures.Couldn't be bother to make any other things,the next total design will include everything + paper,pamphlets and stuff.Sorry for making you click on 100 links,meh.I had a really nice experience with something new and more difficult for me.Could've been better,but hey,it's my first total design and it's already 3AM.Your feedback would be greatly appreciated.

The Legacy Logotype

Visit card

Catalogue

Calendar Head

Palmarium

Wow, all of it is very well done, and very professional.

The Catalogue is probably my favourite piece there, the only one I'm not really feeling is the Calendar, the logo looks a tad out of place, maybe you could try to bring that down lower with the text? The visit card is very classy and the logo type is great as well.

All and all this is very steller work, I'd like to see more like this, it's really great.

adobe

Yeah,i am also not so happy with the calendar,i rushed it a bit.Thanks for your comment.

adobe

Come on guys,i really need some feedback on this.I would like someone who has made total designs and stuff to help me out. :/ I know it's not the best i can do,and i know it's annoying to click on 4 links,but i think this sort of design will be the hardest ever,so i could graduate.

the oscar

First logotype is just awesome, but it's too bright in the middle. Rest looks preety nice.

On visit card, I would like too see how will it looks when you will do a stroke on top text(name) and work on that smaller text(info). Rest looks great here too.

Catalogue, here I don't like that grey faces. Maybe make there something other, because that don't looks so good. And work on textes.

Calendar Head is great at now

adobe

thanks,man.

retired_StealthKing

Logotype;
Amazing! looks really professional and fits the name of the company well, no faults here.

Visit Card;
I think this needs abit more work, i would test out the different colours of the company on the right. For example, maybe a white background with red text. Other than that i would try and work on the contact text (font), too make it easier and clearer to read

Catalogue;
I think that this has huge potential and looks nice, the logo fits well. But, the gray body on the red rectangle isnt quite working for me. The idea is good but it just doesnt look right, maybe vectoring this or having the normal desatrauted pic on colour dogge would improve the look?

Calender;
Again, i like this and think it has great potential. I would consider removing the large bg text though, just doesnt seem to compliment the other text. Apart from that, maybe experimenting with the positioning of the logo.

Overall, great work Vlad Please post any alterations you make

Edit: This post took so long by the time i finished it, i had to sign in again! Lol

Superman

I'm not an expert, but i'll try to help you as much as i can.

The logo is great, my only complain is the text, you should make any part of the text bold, and let the other Roman. The Business card is pretty dark, if your main color is a dark grey, you need to contrast it, so would be ideal to change text and logo color to white, also that shape, the red one, looks a bit odd but that's just me.

The catalogue is not what i expected based on what you made with the logo and the BC. That red thing that crosses the picture looks out of place and that effect that colorinverted image too. There, with that line, you are taking off the focal point of the catalogue. Usually this flyers/catalogues are splitted in 2/3 pasts, generally one outstand more than the others, so in this case you should focus in make an attractive focal point, that means that you must pimp the motorcycle, and based on that complete it. Also i would recommend you to do it Horizontal. Don't take me wrong man... i'm sure that you can fix that few things.

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adobe

Awesome,thanks guys,i won't fix this total design,but i will be making many other in the future,and will try not to make the mistakes you pointed out to me.

retired_bibbles

Now i will write long constructive comment, So as always your works are pro, simple, clean and amazing, Start with:

-The Legacy Logotype: First really like this W & B bg, looks so cool, and than red box, (line or whatever), which make artwork cool, fresh, funky. Text in that box is simple but very cool, great choice of font size and colour, That's amazing. Than logo, i think that this logo rocks, it's so so amazing, really great light effects on it, and looks like old grunge logo in new fresh style, And than you add just few final touches, which made this art very fresh. This part of pack of artwork is amazing.

-Visit card: First is want to say, make it with how can i say with rounded border in corner, maybe you don't understand me, but overall is cool. Background is simple with some cool pattern, and some amazing effects, and than as a finish (really great idea), red area with logo. This make card so funky and cool. Again like say for logo before, old grunge logo in new fresh style. i love this with area on logo, in top side of logo. Text simple but very effective.

-Catalogue: First i really love that red area again, maybe logo here white, maybe is ok, i'm not sure here, but header is really cool, you choose great pic and you make amazing effects, Now about helmet area and body armor area, only bad point here for me is empty grey bg, maybe some pattern on small opacity, rest looks cool.

-Calendar Head: top side looks a bit dark, maybe logo red or white with some funky effects, Picture with motorbike is amazing, i like this letters there.And now about text. Text is simple but very cool effects on it.

Really love this, make some more packs, KIU