Sorry Toxin, but that's almost a crime what you did to that photograph!
You not only destroyed the atmosphere, you als destroyed the pixels, most visible in those bushes. The scene looks absolutely unnatural, above all after you took away most of the red... it's a sunset you know!

You've tried to create something that wasn't there and that's a mistake that a lot of people make. We are probably going to see this a lot more since Adobe introduced the shadow/highlights filter, because suddenly it's getting easy for even a beginner to play with highlights and shadows.
beedyb220, I think yours looks the best (assuming that rest of the sky that's not visible was mostly cloudy too); you took some blue out, left some red in (a bit too much in my opinion) and worked a bit on the contrast (luckily not too much) while keeping this specific sunset atmoshere intact. You also didn't start some challenge to get every detail out of every shadow, because that is wrong in scenes like this.
It can still be improved, but still... well done [righton]