retired_ivy24

My first sig, not that good, umm some good pointers would be nice thanks



Enjoy!

YNWA

retired_articlesworld

Text looks squashed up. Render needs more colour in his face, too pale. Background is ok

but it looks stupid how he is facing the other way, u need to move him over a lot

the brush on far left is too bright for me

FootballWolf

i agree with liverpool_aus with the text but the rest is good

retired_ivy24

thanks for the comments guys - liverpool_aus, i wanted to move it over but it got all too bright and it didnt look good

retired_andydala

Yeah, the text needs work. I also think you need to blend your render into the background a bit more. Right now it looks like you just pasted it onto there as an afterthough. The brushing on the left is too strong. Speaking of brushes, looks like someone else found the winter breeze brushes. Those are nice.