retired_articlesworld

I created a Gerrard wall!!

It may look a little Onskin inspired cause it is, so insiration is to Onskin

It took me about 2 hours to make, my longest, and definately my best

Check it



V2- not much different, just bit more splatter and contrasted the render a little


Comments appreciated

retired_Tiara

The paint splatter has sharp edges, which makes it look less realistic, render needs work, You expose yourself to further criticism by mentioning the design time. 2hrs? You possibly took 1 1/2 hrs to cut the render.

retired_Tiara

Oh my bad, keep practising however.

retired_articlesworld

Actually the render was already cut, i guess it took me 2 hrs to download some brushes and choose what to do. Dont be harsh, im only a beginner

Any other comments???

retired_ivy24

V2 for me, love the text and the 5 stars under the liverbird i like the splatter, but i dont like all the white space, but thats your style

keep it up

retired_articlesworld

thanks

Anymore?

FootballWolf

you owned Bidici with the render cut
and looks great better than your othre work

retired_articlesworld

Thanks!
anyone else?

retired_Dash

Yes I'm sure he did...

To be honest I'm not really a fan of this style you've used on this and you Lampard one, the splatters just look dull and lifeless, the render is better in this one than the Lampard however there's very little to interest about it even if the blending is better. Try using simpler fonts with maybe one or possibly two more elaborate fonts otherwise it tends to be too much. You've added some vector brushes at the bottom and I don't see why, it doesn't add anything and looks a little like you've just downloaded the brushes and though you had to fit them in somewhere.

Keep trying though and you'll improve.

retired_articlesworld

^^ k thanks^^ vector brushes, i dont think i used them? its jsut splater

the 3 were all just experiments, nothing to enter in any competition lol

jsut a bit of fun

any other comments? all of the others have been great