The background's too messy, reduce the clutter, and just keep the 2 images - the brushing's gone very wrong. The render should be the focus and not hidden in the background - make it more apparent - a simple effect like duplicating it and setting it on soft light would look much better.
Text is alright, something simple would have been better i think. I guess you've just started making wallpapers, you're in the right place, look around, get ideas, implement them in your own way. It's a decent start, build on it.
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