retired_pedy.ca

after a lot of time without beeing here,
and a lot of time without use the photoshop at all,
I did a wallpaper today.
I know that it's not my best... anyway, I would like to hear your opinion guys,
so plzzzz commments

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/2946/copy2eg6.jpg

Naama.

retired_pedy.ca

any comments?

retired_isun2

comments?

Bad man... sorry i dont like it... its amateur

retired_pedy.ca

first of all, I'm not man... I'm a girl..
and why did you say amateur? in what ways have you seen it like that?
I would like to hear an explanation.
thanks any way.

p.s.
please replay detailed comments- that I'll knpw what to improve.
thanks.

retired_pnkbttrfli

first of all, be maybe a little more patient, you haven't even wait 2 hours before post again

wall:

render is ok but can be better
I don't really like the texts in the bg, maybe it needs a main text with more opacity
bg isn't that bad but could be better to, a bit to dark for my liking
coloring can also be improve

overall not bad, but I think you can do better