retired_busymom8

Again some work from me

C&C plz and tell me which 1 is better


V1:



V2:

retired_OLIM

hmm it definatley has potential, the bg is good but could use some more effect, the render is really blury i dont know if you put an effect on the render for it too look like that anways sharpen it once or twice, the text i would work on too............hope this helps

retired_busymom8

What would you change at the next? I tried many variations but this one looked best. Maybe I just need some new fonts ... I'll give an update 2morrow , with some of your advices including .. So long

bloc

V2 is the better one for me...i liked the bg with the logo's and the render alone the text is also looking nice......