sorry mate i dont like it alot to explain so here i go, the bg is really really bad, no colours and its really plain so thats one thing to work on, the render looks out of place and i think it would look better in the middle, the text, i think it looks really bad the " anyone who messes with him " ... text is bad and it would probs look better without it, and the the rio ferdinand text i think this could be alot better, maybe a different colour or something to add a bit of flavour............. hope this helps
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