KingKeano

http://www.forumbilder.se/show.asp?iid=CF15600C

My first try on making a wallpaper,what do you guys think?

imported_Dave

Firstly set the pattern on lower opacity. Also there's too much renders - it would be better, if you would leave only one, the one in United kit. Move layer(s?) with render to the top, then make some nice effects on it. BG is very simple, but I found it nice. Delete the white brush, which is placed behind renders. Text is bad placed, too big and I don't like font used. So, overally - now wall's looking quite bad, but after some work it can be nice.

.Envy

hmm this needs alot of work sorry i dont know where to start but anyways, lower the opacity of the pattern, now to the renders, maybe you should only have 1 render in this sig, plus all the renders looks squashed, now the bg, maybe you should add some more effects to it and maybe a little bit of colour or colours..........the text needs alot of work, that text that you have now is barley readable.

i hope this helps