Alberto Gilardino (try-out)

Koenozz · 02-06-2007, 02:35 PM

Just a try-out

Any critics and/or comments?

imported_Dave · 02-06-2007, 02:46 PM

Firstly make new border.
Now 'bout rest. BG has veery big potential, I love textures used, ligtning. Okay, that was time for praise, now critism... So render is really bad (no effects?), and text too. I don't like font used and texts "miracle reflection", also it's placed badly. So - BG has very big potential, rest is bad. Work on it, cause it can be really nice piece, bro.

Koenozz · 02-06-2007, 02:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dave

Firstly make new border.
Now 'bout rest. BG has veery big potential, I love textures used, ligtning. Okay, that was time for praise, now critism... So render is really bad (no effects?), and text too. I don't like font used and texts "miracle reflection", also it's placed badly. So - BG has very big potential, rest is bad. Work on it, cause it can be really nice piece, bro.

Thnx dude

I really can do somethin' with your critics

The render contains some effects (gaussian blur - overlay). I think i'll put the opacity higher

I appreciate your comment!

Version 2:

New border, better effect, better tekst. Is it better in your opinion?

.Envy · 02-06-2007, 10:44 PM

and on your gaussion blur maybe set it to lighten and lower opacity if needed that gives a nice effect................................now to the sig, i think theres too much light thingies in this sig, and maybe you should sharpen the render a bit more.

warioth · 02-07-2007, 12:44 AM

too much lightning in this sig. Maybe border could also be around 3 px

le_max08170 · 02-08-2007, 03:32 PM

good sig

Koenozz · 02-08-2007, 03:44 PM

Thnx all, more comments?

I appreciate.