I don't like this texture with text, which is over layer with render. Render is bad by the way. Also I don't like text - use other font, just combine. BG... it has some potential, but there's too much white space. I think some low-opacitied and desaturated Carrick photos would match well, shapes too. And maybe some layers with gradients?
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