Well for one of your first efforts its not bad, I think you have osme interesting ideas going there with the colour scheme. I also like the fact you've attempted some render effects on the right hand side, most newbies to this kind of stuff will just slap a render on top of their work, but you've gone for a different look, and it works. Text is very poor, but youre fairly new and you'll catch along with text ideas as you progress. The lines coming out of the render dont work too well, but its a good idea. Overall you have done well so keep it up.
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