retired_Christ Hordern

Ok new wall, very new style for my second wall back. I am not sure with this one, but I know this will end up been very good once I get my friend to start working with my to hand draw designs with a graphics tablet but I think working with animation and technical images will be the future of walls.

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/5769/gallasai7.jpg

bill164

Nice stuff, just a couple of faults for me. The cutting on the right hand side of the render looks a little random, not sure what the effect given off is trying to be, the render itself needs a touch more brightness too. Also, perhaps try making the red paint splat a big more brighter, maybe put it onto Lighten or even Normal at 100%. Apart from that it's looking great, I love the brushing and text.

Btw, sorry I went offline on msn the other day randomly, my internet connection broke.

retired_Christ Hordern

aha yeh i forgot to say, I just did a rough rough cut of the player and then forgot/couldnt be bothered to cut another out. I see this more as an evolving peice for me so no worries.

flee

Looks very nice, really like the stuff to the left. But it kinda looks like Gallas's arm is hanging like loose in the air. Maybe add some red to the background. Keep up the good work

retired_Christ Hordern

cheers, yeh i see what you mean about the arm and the shorts look werid too, where would you suggest red to go? I kind of thought just a plain grey/white/black tonned background.

Ripple

this is just like ur rvp wall.

...its still nice tho

retired_Christ Hordern

yeh I know I am trying to perfect the concept I have in mind, this is still developing, thanks for the encouragment though