oneightwo

filled the space in the middle, and introduced more colour

here

scr33n

Sorry but I'm not going to write about something, what it lacks, how to improve when I AM NOT the designer.

And also if someone doesn't put effort into their shit and gives me some shit submissions - I'm not going to bother putting in quality feedback.

scr33n

Again Onenight, I think it is an ok concept - but it's a bit boring and flat. Doesn't really have quality to it.

It looks like something you'd find in one of those kid coloring books. Not really a logo for a possible Gym/Club

Shed Upper

Heres a design i made earlier, ill have another go later.



Shed Upper

scr33n

Thanks nod1ine - glad to see there is someone with common sense here. This isn't a "head to head" contest to see who is the "hottest" designer bulgarian dude, this is for actual cash and for $100 which is a nice amount for doing something you like to do as a hobby or interest. Keep that in mind.

oneightwo

it would be nice for him to be precise, but if you think of it differently, its like wide open and anything goes.

I'll try to come up with a different concept but still have my own opinions on what looks good on a company logo. gradients and textures arent something i would use but if the guy wants it, fine.

da_eej

here man had another crack at it:

josh_pvfc

v1 -

v2 -

will change any colours, shapes etc or u can just have the cartoon

da_eej

any feedback on my recent one??

thanks!

josh_pvfc

different shape