retired_hollie

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comments reallly appreciated. please c&c if you're here

v2

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markeaton

This is awesome, i really love this. The render and the light is a beast.

retired_santhika

Good job, great background and lighting. Not too sure about the render, seems to dark, and the text isnt placed that well however the font is decent. KIU

chiquita1

impressive work.

i think it has some potential, but the text is really killing it here, kinda ruins the flow completely. I feel with some great text and a couple of tweaks here and there, this would be a fantastic wall.. but at the moment, it's just a good one.

Nice work though, keep it up.

justins

Yeh, Impressive work!

The bg is class, the effects are amazing, the rest of elements are good, I really like it, you're best, sure. keep it up.

retired_hollie

thanks for comments here's second version with changed text, also was playing with colours and added a few details (for example brushes behind render).


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Slated

text is much better, really like the light and the 'scratches'

marydj7

created by ste? :eek:

great wall. new text is better. whats up with that black mark above his head though?
anyhow, everything is great

keep it up levy

retired_killer13

:eek: this is nice!!! but^^^thats a good question:cool: new text rocks but im not sure hes a magic midfielder tho:p

retired_hollie

whats up with that black mark above his head though? ->
there's a lot of layers with render, so you would see mistakes in cutting, and I just blurred it a bit.

created by ste? ->
yeh, just on other forum it's my nick steve finnan, that's the point
thanks for opinions!