Hm... first the look on the render is nice! The idea with the lttile text-parts is also good! The text itself is fine.
But... the coloring is.. ouch. ^^
The yellow-part on top shouldn't cover the render
imo. And i would leave it at two colors, i think.
But the idea is really nice!
M obA R T femI N S ~>*nufc 
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