Hey all, I love this forum. All of you are very talented with Photoshop and programs alike. I have just gotten into the scene of "attempting" to make things to insert into Pro Evolution Soccer. I have made 2 "press start" screens so far. Tell me what you think. Keep in mind, I really need to work on my detail work and brushes. The problem with the "shiny" or "glowing" look of textures for start screens is that in PES6 you can only use 256 colors max in 8 bit mode. So it can potentially suck out the life of a beautiful piece of art. Here are 2 screens of my "attempt" (because I'm not very good yet

) at making screens. Tell me what you all think

. Any constructive criticism is wanted and welcome.
** All pictures are in 256 color 8 bit (indexed) .png format ** 
This above may look dark because I turn my gamma of my monitor up. When I inserted it in-game at a brighter state, it looked washed out

(second attempt at a start screen).

This was my first attempt at making a start screen.