I like this. It looks pretty nice. The effect is nice but it could be executed a bit better i think, still looking a little out of place. Infact, i think if you had that disintegrating effect on the left hand side it would look more real, because he's running from that direction, so it will look like he's leaving a trail behind. Maybe try a render where there's more motion you know? It wont look out of place then. The BG's nice and i like the colours. Typography definitely has to improve, it really lets down the wall.
Keep at it, this is better that quite a lot of the other stuff i see. Good work.
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