There's no frame for first.
BG is looking quite nice, the brushes are making it a little sharp and it's the bad thing. Delete this brush and it will be nice.
Text... I don't like it. Idea and executing, also font is bad.
Render is good, but a lil' bit too dark on left side of Henry's face. Make it lighter.
Overally good, make text better, render lighter and delete this brush from BG, and it will be nice.
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Thierry Henry 
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