retired_HiDeeMay

got really stuck on this, im shit with bg's, can never be fucked. anyways, i guess you can say its simple, im not sure what the colours will look like on your computers, cos ive got a different res on my mac, hope it looks god.

http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/5751/rvp2ek7.jpg

oh, and i was gonna send it to donald 4 a collab, but apparently donald doesn't exist.

thanks guys.

Yoinky

Looks great Ash. I would remove the brushes over the render, and make the background cleaner, yeah I just don't feel well the grunge brushes on the background. Other than it's really nice, especially the text.

retired_StealthKing

looks really great ash
as usual the lighting is great and looks really good with the text and patterns. I really love the RVP text behind the render, looks superb. :cool:
but i cant help thinking that the render doesnt fit :confused:
keep it up

chiquita1

The perspective behind the render look class man, as does the lighting and text, but I dunno.. I think the rest is a bit of a let down.

I think the render looks poor imo, im not a fan of the brushing over it and I think maybe give it more saturation would look better? I dunno.

Also maybe try giving a bit more detail in the bg where it doesn't have a lot going on, maybe some images or a skyline or something.

But it's still a nice piece man, with a bit of tweaking it would be better.

retired_HiDeeMay

thanks lads, im gonna go over it again 2moro probs, using your suggestions.

diamen

wow , mate , that's class , i thought u can't make something better than your Gip wall , but u did .
Love the lighting and perspective blocks , great render and really good text , nothing to fault , well done.

retired_Bandersen618

very nice, i been making sumthing similar with the same render though

retired_Maqbool

Awww it's awesome . Great background ,text ,render ,nothing more to say - fabolous .
KIU !