Not bad for your first wall. The BG in fact is quite impressive for a first wall.
BUT, here's what you can improve on -
The BG is too saturated, its tooo yellow. And if i'm not wrong, you've put Gerrard under a color balance layer, and the render's also become tooo yellow.
The render's toooo tooo tooooo blurred. Reduce the blurring, go for a simple effect (like a duplicated layer set on overlay).
Text - The faded out text is ok but you need some text closer to the render - try something like Steven Gerrard - Liverpool captain, or Captain fantastic or England and Liverpool. Add his jersey number in there somewhere. Play around with the size and opacities of the different text - the jersey number can be big and set at a very low opacity, 'captain fantastic' can be in smaller text close to the main `steven gerrard' text.
Hope this helps. Its a good beginning, build on it.
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