Dtunam

This is so effing polished compared to the other one, comments are really appreciated, so please do!

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/40537054/

This isn't a home page btw, just an offshot.

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Dtunam

Ok it obviously isn't then. Okie dokie. What can I do to improve it then? C'mon 56 have seen this thread and know what's wrong. I'm sorry to go against the bumping rule but please can somebody comment.

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??19??

i like it its basic not too crowded nice colours that dont go against each other
i like it

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Ava By Bov

Dtunam

Thanks, just the outcome I was hoping for . Anymore comments?

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CarefreeChris

Have a greater contrast between bg colour and text colour. It's all very well having a nice looking site, but it means bugger all if the content isn't very easy to read.