retired_killer13

ummm i know im not dat good but comments wud b appreciated

Heres4Hoping

the bg does not fit well with the chosen Render maybe one in white Jersey would fit better. but the burgundy/red whatever its is,its not working. good try though

retired_8krunner

I guess it looked better in your head. Just doesn't work. Try to cut out the render properly and desature the bg a bit.

SKT174

Good idea of including an image like that in the background but it needs something else to it because by the looks of it, it's quite boring to be honest, add some better colours and don't make the background so shiny as the attention isn't on Kaka mainly but on the background. Quite good though.

retired_killer13

thanks for the tips guys i really appreciate them ill try 2 post up a version 2 but im a bit busy with school nowadays

retired_killer13

v2 tell me what u think