amoy92

no text. couldn't think what to do. help on text would be nice pwease?

birthday surprise for jefferson :cool:

and thanks to the cutting machine that cut this. i forget who it was, but was a great cut.

Steve

You can have 3-D text on the footpath on a distorted angle, would look nice and add a sense of depth to the piece. Looks like a real good manip, would love to see a few more details.. looking good man.

B.N.F.

Looks really cool mate, i really like the bg, looks so calm and peacefull, love it, the render looks also really nice and its well put, but i think the wall needs some text and it will be even better. Keep it up bro

amoy92

version 2.



much better imo

B.N.F.

Yeah like you said its much better than the first version. The bg looks really awesome now, i liked it in the first version also, but now its even better. Now it looks more colorfull and maybe thats the main reason why its much better.

SKT174

The render needs to stand out mroe in my opinion, the rest is ok, include another image on the background too to add some more detail.