bobane

comments plz

KTC

The lighting on the shirt and his face is too much for me

I like the background though

.Envy

I Agree ^^^^

ix-xibi

Good work, I don't like the size of the font and the light on him, I think he size of the font is too big and the lighting on him isn't good, it makes him (the player) unclear. Add a better border as well, good work for the background.

bobane

is it better now??

ix-xibi

It's better now mate but still improve the render effects.

bobane

ok thx

SWFC

Looks a lil too plain on the second 1 but improved on the first

Wievior

The letter E in the second one is rather a pound letter

I quite like the bg, but it's just a little bit to plain, add some photo, on low opacity on it, or just some more shapes.

The render cut is very sharp, so try to soften the edges, also - give it more colour, or desature the bg a bit, couse now the background has more colour than the render - bad!

Other than that ^^^, nice

Hez8

The second attempt is better because it's not so bright.