amoy92

went for a new, aged textured effect.

cha think?

corked

Good work, I like the look of it.

Just seems a bit unfinished

B.N.F.

Its not that bad mate, i think it could be better, i dont like much the colors. The text looks fine, but the bg needs more IMO. I`ve seen better from you mate...

chiquita1

yea i agree it seems unfinished. the basis is there, but the bg is a bit empty and text dont look great. render looks class tho, keep it up.

laytownking

Agree, it looks unfinished. The texturing's really nice. Try using some splatter or stain brushes to give the BG more detail - everything looks very plain. The render's a little too bright. Text is nice and simple.

Good job, keep it up!